I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Miss Ashley.
Monday, September 19, 2016
It was a scary haze the man was the only one ho survived the invisible wolves and the white,black and red hosted spiky Grenade MONSTER the MONSTER looked like a house. The trees where made loud of spikes he touch the poisoned spikes then he died.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you have tried to use some powerful words like poisoned spikes and invisible wolves. What a scary place to be in!
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