It was a shiny glorious day for this lady.The lady took her shoes off and Chuck it away then she had ran away so fast then she was tied so she she had to lye  down in the mud.

It was a scary haze the man was the only one ho survived the invisible wolves and the white,black and red hosted spiky Grenade MONSTER the MONSTER looked like a house. The trees where made loud of spikes he touch the poisoned spikes then he died.    

The alarm

Today we had to write about a short clip we watched. Our goal was to describe IN DETAIL what we saw. This was just a practice so then when we wrote our own stories, we know how to write in detail and don't forget to leave things out. It helps the reader get a picture in their head, like a movie, of what I am writing.

This is the clip we used.
(Only the first 1 minute - about the boy sleeping through his alarms)



This is what I wrote.

The genteel breeze were blowing the open window the curtains were swaying  side to side the radio showed 6: 59 am the radio showed 7 : 00 and said good morning then the radio played guitar

Do you think I have described what happened in lots of detail?
Please leave me a comment to let me know if I did achieve my goal or not.

A glorious morning

It was a glorious morning for three girls going to school. The three girls went under a tunnel the tunnel was so dark that the small girl was so scars that she wanted to run the odes one assent scar of any thing the medium girl was a little scar and they keep on going they where in a forest they needed some help        

Speed maths

Today we are practising learning our basic facts.We are using the game speed skills to do this.This game is about knowing your basic facts and beating your own score from before.It is not about beating someone else.It is about beating yourself.

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